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The Ugly Truth
1 January, 2012
Author: Meridian Zuriel

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Just looking at it makes me disgusted
Look away
Run
Hide
Conceal
The ugly truth reveals
What’s hidden
What’s underneath
What’s covered
Sometimes is discovered

I am unique
They make me so
Wish it, they
Didn’t show
Maybe if it wasn’t, they weren’t there
My smile would glow
But it has yet to shine
Too dim to be light bright
Beholding what’s in
My eyesight
Upset, jealous

I complain
I’m grumpy
Moody
Wish to be
What I dream to be
What I’d love to be
Another fantasy

How you make me sick
You demand attention
Stares, glares
Who cares?
I care
Which makes me share
This 25 year-old’s melancholia
I call it a pity party
Or a party pity
Because I’m glum city
Wish this problem
Was itty bitty
Or wasn’t a problem at all
Wasn’t an issue
Didn’t control my smile
Didn’t control my attitude
Didn’t control my outlook
Didn’t control me
MZ
How I crave to be
What I dream to be
Carefree
Guess I’ll go back
To my fantasy
(For eternity)

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Comments on this poem/writing:

Terrie* (98.239.78.217) -- Saturday, January 7 2012, 01:12 am

Ya gotta Believe in Yourself-I Believe in You!!

Holy Moses!
not sure where this came from Sweetie,
but it was packed with a Mighty Punch !!!
Honey, One is much bigger than lifes issues!!!
One can shake off and Dismiss the situations that Control us..
Example Look at a tiny Ant...Need I say more??
Lets take a walk ...One can Be who they Want to be...Especially YOU!!
one can NOT give in and give up on their Dreams ! prematurely ..Especially YOU!!
its those stumblin' blocks that make us or break us!!!
Ya gotta Believe in Yourself-I Believe in You!!
Ya,we just have to BELIEVE!!!
( a lesson we've all learned)
HAPPY NEW YEAR!!Namaste, Terrie
Meri (108.26.65.183) -- Sunday, January 8 2012, 06:01 am

Thanks so much Ms. Terrie

I write a lot of poems to help me as I go through. I have a long way to go and intend to get there. It's just taking me a while. Thanks for the encouragement though. You're so nice.
William Bill Jones (138.162.8.57) -- Wednesday, December 5 2012, 12:36 pm

Love This

This aggressive style allows me to feel "maybe" what you were feeling. Impressive stuff.
Meri (98.166.164.19) -- Wednesday, December 5 2012, 09:06 pm

Thanks William

It's about my appearance. Lol.
 
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