Girl Undone
26 August, 2003
Author: Elizabetta
designer jeans
"Oh I know, I love that store"
spending limited lifted
card will never bounce
So sure I'll never break
Tan legs
"water looks great"
scene looks like baywatch everyone dives in
Unaware it's much too shallow
Flirtatious giggle
"But if you love me"
and after a couple of drinks
this just has to be love
that slowly breaks my heart
Empty room
"silence"
cold concrete floor
regrets are all that remain
when I'm all alone
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Comments on this poem/writing:
| Martin Vann (63.185.80.145) -- Sunday, July 18 2004, 07:15 pm Lady E, It has been some time, since, you shared, your heart with us. I would like to sya, I, am the one, that misses, you most, that would not be true. ou you ever feel, like no one listens, to your hear? If, you do, "I" know how you feel. When you write, you take the strenght out me, I feel the need, to be weak again, will you please, write aging, if, not for me, then for all who miss your heart, yes, Lady E, I am one. MartinV |
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