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A New Game
12 April, 2003
Author: Elizabetta

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raindrops dance on our skin as we stand,
uncomfortable like two little kids
meeting for the first time
under the canopy
of a stormy summer sky
the funny thing is
we didn't just meet
we ate dirt together
played tag,
grew up
you wouldn't know it tonight

his hand grasps for mine
tag your it
I smile and try
to chase you with an endearing smile
and a few akward words,

uncomfortable pause

you must have surrendered
and we walk off in silence
together
still I long
for the simpler days
and I wonder
why must the game change

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Comments on this poem/writing:

Stacy (152.163.253.5) -- Thursday, August 7 2003, 03:00 pm

Amazing

You are such an amazing writer. I love how you capture such a complex moment
Meri (173.94.251.136) -- Saturday, November 10 2018, 06:04 am

I agree

So many good poets up here. I always see a picture when I click on a title of your work.
 
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