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My Cross Country Nick Name
11 July, 2013
Author: Mental

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Even though the darkness overcomes
the proper pieces of emotions
equals up the sums.
the little bits of cracks
resemble the tones
that it lacks.
you might crash
you might burn
that was my cross country nickname
one day i learned.
after the race season
part of the womb i used to be
and the donor part
to begin me,
died.

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Comments on this poem/writing:

taboo (71.68.228.189) -- Thursday, February 20 2014, 03:18 am

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two different stories here. put together. nice
core (71.68.228.189) -- Wednesday, July 23 2014, 03:22 am

okay= confusion

you lost me
 
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