Places Of Fun by Dino Hi

We hooked up so many years ago
Gone to many places of fun
You carried the load where ever we go
Together through the curves and bends as one

But our light is going out
It is corroding at it's base
The flow of the juice of life is a shout
How come I can't fix this in any case

I've tried and tried and now tired
Hours frustrated over and over the same thing
I've tested my patience and it's expired
Can I solve the problem with a phone ring

Places of fun can someday be achieve
As we fuse what we once had
I know we will get there I believe
The lights will shine brightly from my cab

Confound it! Been working on my truck and trailer for 8 days, re-wiring, new lights and blowing fuses & the wallet is still out. 4 separate places for fuses, and the one I needed was 2, way up high by the steering column behind a spaghetti of wires. Smart? Places of fun? Please, let there be light?

Chris G. Vaillancourt (206.126.85.99) -- Thursday, August 15 2013, 05:17 am

Not bad
This wasn't terribly bad, could have done without the rhymes though, but that is me

Tierra* (98.239.78.217) -- Friday, September 6 2013, 08:12 am

Thumbs Up!
Excellent flow....rather cute lil piece...I can resonate with this...a Royal read...

Dino Hi! (24.19.113.200) -- Wednesday, September 18 2013, 04:44 am

Thanks Tierra!
I appreciate your comment Tierra. Have a great day. Oh, and you too Chris. I'm not a good poet, but I like to participate once in awhile.

Capricorn (92.238.86.155) -- Friday, January 31 2014, 01:30 am

Hi there!
Love this - it's always good to read your poems

Dino Hi! (24.19.113.200) -- Friday, January 31 2014, 02:41 am

How'z it Cap!
Thanks Cap! Been a long time. Appreciate your comments. Take care and have a great day.

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