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Empty Door Frame
3 April, 2014
Author: Mental

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Empty door frame
lost memories
of a lovers game.
door unhinged
angry emotions
on the fringe.
doorway passages
eluded from me
I'm somehow without emotion
as far as a can see.

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Comments on this poem/writing:

Tarna (107.133.200.6) -- Thursday, April 3 2014, 05:56 am

Walking thru

It seems to me you have plenty of emotion.. And it reads well in this one. Good write Mental. I always enjoy your words.
mental (71.68.228.189) -- Thursday, April 3 2014, 07:41 pm

thank you for comment

thank you very much
mental (71.68.228.189) -- Thursday, April 3 2014, 07:48 pm

tarna thanks for comment

thank you
core (71.68.228.189) -- Wednesday, July 23 2014, 03:16 am

nice twist

nice twist on words
tide (172.56.4.241) -- Thursday, July 30 2015, 10:08 pm

empty

I like, thanks
Raibow (172.58.155.122) -- Friday, September 4 2020, 11:25 pm

To mental

So deep thank you
 
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