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In Need Of A Dream
7 May, 2014
Author: Tarna

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I'm in need of a dream
A future with me in mind
Something to look forward to
and someone to share it with me

I dream of someone
who wont tire of me
and look for some one new,
casting me aside as yesterdays news

I need a place where I feel important
not just day in day out repeat stuff
but a happy I am alive place
where I can walk and feel free

I need some time
set aside for just me
Without kowtowing to others
nor fulfilling their needs

I need to be first once in a while
instead of second to everything in life
I want to feel special and needed
Not just someone's wife

I'm in need of a dream that's attainable
Where love holds the key
that unlocks the prison of a mundane life,
just for me

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Comments on this poem/writing:

Puppet (67.160.238.239) -- Friday, May 16 2014, 01:10 pm

Great work Tarna!

I think you touched on something we all can identify with, the need for solitude and self-love even in the midst romance (or the search for it).
It's always better to find love for yourself than try to find it in external vindication- cause once we love ourselves, others will find it easier to do so too! Great write!
Tarna (107.133.200.6) -- Saturday, May 17 2014, 12:19 am

Puppet

Thank-you for your comment/compliment. I am glad that I got the thought and feeling across.
Shan (66.87.116.226) -- Wednesday, May 21 2014, 03:24 pm

wow!

Awesome and amazing!!! I agree, you touched what we all can relate to, and you did it exquisitely!!
 
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