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Alone
29 November, 2002
Author: Elizabetta

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Moonlight penetrates,
hits my tear-stained face
soaks straight to my soul.
A rush, a cool sensation
an icey river through my veins.
The beams carry with them,
bitter sadness, sugar coated
Like a cloud of pain, silver lined
The shadows gracefully dance
light encircles me
lost and lonely
in an empty world
the moon and I

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Comments on this poem/writing:

martin Vann (65.56.173.61) -- Friday, January 10 2003, 08:55 pm


This is a beautiful person
Pamela (66.38.146.85) -- Saturday, January 11 2003, 06:49 pm

Breathtaking

Breathtaking. Thats all I can say. Brought upon unspeakable amounts of emotion.
Capricorn (62.31.144.1) -- Sunday, January 12 2003, 03:07 am

Short

A short poem with lots of feeling...really like it
 
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