Lying Open by ErinBrenna

My arms around your neck.
My skin wet on your lips.
Your hands running through my hair.
All over my body, your finger tips.

Everything is open, slowly giving in.
The feeling inside, the sensation of sin.
I feel the warmth inside you, stirring somewhere deep.
Concealed by your detachment, it yearns to be set free.
In this moment of wrong, disobeying everything we know,
I found this emotion in you, you've never let go.

So I let you take me, making you brave.
Giving to your weakness, all my strength.

And it tingles my soul.
Now I can feel it pumping through you.
So vigorious, so uncontrolled.
Passion that overcomes me, passion I never knew.

Enchantress (206.214.66.2) -- Monday, August 4 2003, 11:27 pm

How romantic can you get....
It's lovely all the way, no questions asked. It's so passionate, so beautiful, best love poem I've ever read!

Stacy (152.163.252.134) -- Thursday, August 7 2003, 03:13 pm

Cool
That was a great peom. I like how it goes beyond simply sex; you work in wonderful metaphors and deep meaning while staying lyrical and graceful. Lovely.

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