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Freedom
11 January, 2004
Author: Everett

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You will never be free from this nightmare.
Never free from a cold stare.
You will never be free from a life that isn't fair.
Never free from the rain that falls through the air.

A cold black sky
Your mirror's cry
The pain you feel
The wounds that just don't heal
Never free from the lies.

You will never be free from a world full of hate.
Never free from something as dark as fate.
Freedom will always have its price to pay.
It's time to live your life day by day.
You need to say what you need to say.
Opportunity is slipping away...

How long will freedom last?

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Comments on this poem/writing:

Cupcake (10.12.239.16) -- Monday, January 12 2004, 10:54 pm

hey there

hey i really liked this one..... hope to see even more of your writing... you have a great talent, use it wisely. ;o)
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love you forever
everett (209.240.207.249) -- Wednesday, January 14 2004, 10:48 pm

thank you

Thanks! i really appreciate your thoughts on my poem... love you too
LinzAy (65.40.22.241) -- Sunday, February 22 2004, 10:37 pm

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Another good writing from our Ev!
 
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