12-31-84 - 1-1-04
1 January, 2003
Author: Everett
o anyone who cares.
I don't know how much more i can take.
Please read if you're out there.
I just hope this isn't a mistake.
Sympathize with what i have to say.
I've tried to convince myself that everything was alright.
There is no way out, nothing is ever okay.
I'm dead inside, my life just isnt worth a fight.
My heart has been broken in two.
Tonight I will write my last words, take my last breath of air.
The love was all so new.
I'll fade with darkness into the night, nobody will care.
Im taking a gun to my head.
I thought i would write this before i say goodbye.
Not knowing in a split second if i will be dead.
I thought i would write this on New years, the day i die.
I say goodbye in my final dispair.
Once i pull the trigger i will feel better.
If your out there, say at my grave that you care.
If you remember me at all, remember me in this letter....
------- Author's Notes -------
Every other line is a different story. One of someone who wants sympathy, and the other of someone who just wants out of life) |
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Comments on this poem/writing:
| Brenda (198.81.26.39) -- Monday, January 5 2004, 03:42 pm I think we did a good job on this poem dont you? well, LOVE U FOREVER UR WIFE |
| LinzAy (65.35.22.28) -- Saturday, January 10 2004, 05:12 am Hmmm..i believe i agree with you brenda.....you guys did vury vury good :D me's likes |
| brenda and ev (209.240.207.249) -- Saturday, January 10 2004, 10:09 pm thanks for the comment.....glad that you liked it... |
| Stacey (68.82.126.206) -- Sunday, February 1 2004, 05:37 pm I really liked this one. Awesome job guys !! |
| Brenda And Ev (198.81.26.39) -- Friday, March 26 2004, 02:07 pm thanks stacey, glad you liked it. |
| Tammy (66.38.4.61) -- Friday, March 26 2004, 03:36 pm I liked this poem...You both did an awesome job together. Great Poem!!!!!! |
| everett and brenda (209.240.207.249) -- Friday, March 26 2004, 10:49 pm hey tammy, thanks for your comment! :) glad you liked it |
| LinzAy (24.27.237.195) -- Monday, May 3 2004, 07:57 pm Ah..one i dont think i've read. I dont remember tho especially since the comments were erased...this is brilliant..good work! |
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