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If You Want To Take Me Over
22 February, 2018
Author: Mental

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If you want to
take me over
you're always in the clear
if you want to cry on my shoulder
I'll share a tear.
If you want to
shout out your commotions
I'll be your sounding board
if you want to shatter my emotions
for you I'll spare more than I can afford.
If you want to have
another touch
I'll be your feel
if you want to be supported
I'm willing to heal.

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Comments on this poem/writing:

Raibow (172.58.158.234) -- Sunday, August 30 2020, 05:24 am

To mental

Hey another good one thanks
barb (66.103.47.14) -- Thursday, September 3 2020, 03:09 am

helping others is nice but help yourself first

Mental nice deep writing thanks for sharing.
Mental (172.58.158.198) -- Friday, September 4 2020, 01:34 am

To barb

Thank you
barb (66.103.47.14) -- Monday, September 7 2020, 09:27 pm

another good one

you write from your heart which is very, very nice
Mental (172.58.155.107) -- Monday, September 7 2020, 11:50 pm

To barb

Thank you
barb (66.103.47.14) -- Tuesday, September 8 2020, 02:53 am

emotional kind of person i am

with me being emotional I love writes that share feelings. don't ever stop showing your feelings.
Mental (172.58.155.94) -- Wednesday, September 9 2020, 01:35 am

To barb

Yeah i know the feeling sometimes feeling bad brings out the poetic juices. And just flows.
barb (66.103.47.14) -- Wednesday, September 9 2020, 05:40 am

yep bad means good writes

its weird when nothing happens I have nothing to write ha ha
 
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