The Seven Shadows 2
19 April, 2003
Author: Everett
(Part 2: The Story Continues)
I watched as seven shadows fell through the stars.
They fell to the ground revealing thier scars.
For six days and nights the rain continued to decline.
Puddles on the ground form seven designs.
Three shadows survive, four die.
The design was right, death would come from the sky.
Four puddles sit as a grave.
Three are left to save.
A piano softly plays in the background.
Yet nobody can hear a sound.
I listened as the storyteller's voice began to decay.
The sky was caving in, everything was rotting away.
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Comments on this poem/writing:
| Leah06 (12.232.5.189) -- Monday, April 21 2003, 05:58 pm You have out done yourself evertett! Nice work. You are also a great poet! |
| LinzAy (205.188.208.41) -- Monday, April 21 2003, 06:12 pm Ah! Everett!! This is awesome....this set of poems is very different from your usual style.......me's like:D not saying you should make a permanent change...heh heh |
| Brenda Michelle (10.144.2.42) -- Monday, April 21 2003, 08:31 pm it looks like she did put them on here! i like this poem and the first one! i bet the third will be even better!!!!!!!!!!! keep up the great work!!! |
| luc (68.74.155.162) -- Tuesday, April 22 2003, 02:29 am good poem.. |
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