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The Seven Shadows 1
17 April, 2003
Author: Everett

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(Part 1: The First Story)


Seven shadows blend into the night's sky.
Six days of Rain.
Five demons dance as the clouds cry.
Forever and a day we wait in vain.
Three stories are told in a trance.
Twice ive felt the burning down my spine.
One heart bleeds at a glance.
Mine.

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Comments on this poem/writing:

Brenda Michelle (209.179.56.220) -- Saturday, April 19 2003, 05:22 am

WOWZERS

wow this is a great poem (story). you did a great job of sicribing what you feel!! keep up the great work!!!!!!

p.s. here is a rose for a woderful poet! @-,-------
LinzAy (64.12.96.136) -- Saturday, April 19 2003, 05:31 am

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:D Great start to the story!!!!
everett (67.29.163.238) -- Saturday, April 19 2003, 06:01 am

Thank you

aww thanks for the rose Brenda :) im glad ya liked it.

Thanks Linzay!!
Crystal (206.216.222.170) -- Sunday, April 20 2003, 04:10 am

...............wohh!

I really liked this poem, very beautiful imagination!
everett (67.29.162.111) -- Monday, April 21 2003, 07:40 am

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hey thanks Crystal :)
 
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