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A Choice
22 October, 2002
Author: Everett

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Lost and surrounded by Voices
A Two way road leading to the edge
The edge of reality and Dreams
Which one will i choose?
Doesnt matter
Either way i will still be
in the same place
Confused
A life so uncertain
So many questions and so few answers
Reality is so dark
Shadows crawl from the darkness
They consume my thoughts
Dreams are so confusing
Do they come true?
Or do i make them come true?
yet more questions
I walk towards both roads as
i begin to choose
I stand still awaiting my decision
I awake as i think about the choice i made

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Comments on this poem/writing:

LinzAy (209.240.198.62) -- Friday, October 25 2002, 12:42 am

Yet another

Well there ya go Everett! Yet another good poem written by ya!
everett (209.240.198.62) -- Friday, October 25 2002, 03:28 am

Thanks

Thanks Linzay :)
barb (206.191.91.80) -- Friday, October 25 2002, 03:19 pm

liked it

anything read by linzay and any comment by her made me read this she's right good one.
Tiffany (68.10.181.250) -- Saturday, October 26 2002, 04:18 am


i agree
everett (209.240.198.62) -- Tuesday, October 29 2002, 01:18 am

Thanks

Thank you Both :)
ice (24.55.230.112) -- Tuesday, April 1 2003, 03:30 am

nice

it was very good i like it very much
LinzAy (64.12.96.70) -- Wednesday, April 30 2003, 07:24 pm

Anything read by me

hey Barb! i didn't notice that until now! That was extremely flattering!!
 
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