Lost by Ghost

Drowning in a pool of emptyness
False reality is all that surrounds me
Nobody calls
Nobody cares
Why shouldn't I end it all
One quick shot, cut, or jump
Everything ends
I'm still waiting for my emotional scars to heal
The ones you created
You showed me people are dishonest
You taught me how to lie
So why can't I end it all
Right here, right now
Because you won't win
I will make your life a living hell
Once I get my way
But until then, I'll be struggling to stay afloat
While drowning in this pool of emptyness

XoForeverXo (12.30.227.187) -- Friday, May 2 2003, 03:15 am

wow
this is a sad poem but i like it...hang in there, things will get better...and ull be stronger eventually..im not good with advice..but someone cares..even though you may not kno it

Leah06 (12.232.5.189) -- Friday, May 2 2003, 03:32 am

i care!
Like i tell everyone else, i am always here to talk to and i try to help as much as i can. This is an awsome poem, i liked it alot!

Simik (68.116.0.190) -- Tuesday, May 6 2003, 05:14 am

Depressing
how sad it is to read... Really good though.

Natalia (65.114.84.73) -- Friday, January 2 2004, 06:31 am

jeeze
wow very good poem! its really sad though that anybody has to feel like that. just know that there are so many people out there who care for you and dont ever forget that!

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