Suicide by Hate Life

it beats me down like a shallow fall
laughing in my face
enjoying all it can taste
stroking my legs with evil
glances wondering how i taste
it licks my face and cries in pain
as i swallow the pill and end my fame

kim (66.72.31.157) -- Thursday, April 22 2004, 08:58 am

great
wow wonderfull i hope you really arnt thinking of suicide if you are really reconsider it..

Renee Balzan (203.164.166.124) -- Saturday, September 4 2004, 07:57 am

Please
i woould like to use your peom in my drama solo a don't want people to think i have writen it so i will tell them you wrote it i just would like to use it and entertain others please.

Vanessa (4.226.252.60) -- Tuesday, April 12 2005, 11:30 pm

Awesome...but WHAT?!
YOur poem is hott but I don;t get it....licking your face?? weird.

sissy (69.95.175.233) -- Saturday, July 1 2006, 06:28 pm

liked it!
ummm i really liked it cause theres times when i feel like that but u shouldnt really do it cause i bet ur a wonderful person on the inside and out!

kelsey (10.0.24.171) -- Friday, September 22 2006, 04:59 pm

nice
it kinda gets down to the bone. if you know what i mean

kelsey (10.0.24.171) -- Friday, September 22 2006, 05:01 pm

depressing
It reminds me of my problems and how hard it is going to be when i tell my mom i am a cutter!!!

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