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Dear God
20 February, 2004
Author: Heaven

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now i lay me down to sleep,
and when you choose for me to finally leave,
please dont let my loved one's grieve,

i pray the lord my sould to keep,
dont let my soul ever grow weak,
please dont let life's pain make we weep,

if i should die,
before i wake,
please tell my friends,
i can be replaced,
but please dont ever forget my face,

i pray the lord my sould to take,
that if and when i never wake,
tell me every one will be okay,
so i can peacfully go on my way...

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Comments on this poem/writing:

PoeticDemon (24.15.118.213) -- Tuesday, March 23 2004, 12:06 am

sooo sad

This poem is sooo sad but i love it none the less, keep up the good work your a great writer i love you heaven!
love ~James~
heaven (68.43.99.209) -- Tuesday, March 23 2004, 12:23 am

thanx james

im glad u like my poem's...thank u so much!!love you 2...~heaven
darin weilert (69.129.54.250) -- Saturday, September 23 2006, 05:00 am

permission & like it

dear author I like your poem very much, it is something i need to read everyday. I would love have a copy of, if that is ok.
Christine (216.79.183.107) -- Friday, December 15 2006, 04:10 pm

I like that

I like that, that was really cool.
heaven (208.182.196.194) -- Thursday, December 6 2007, 07:35 pm

darin

you may have a copy if u still want one.im glad my poem has had such an impact on you....from now on i shall call this Darin's poem.:)
 
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