To My Only Love
8 March, 2004
Author: Heaven
alone in the dark of a shadowed room,
the voices i heard let me know i was doomed,
a raiser in hand,
i began to think of you...
i thought of your smile and your dark brown eyes,
i was truthful when i said "for you i would die,"
you were my only love,and you ruined my life,
i dont understand how you could treat me so bad,
you were everything.you were my man,
you were the only thing i ever cherished and had,
you got what you wanted and went on your way,
i cant believe ten happy months
could add up to this one lonely day,
i thought that you were truthful,
i thought that you cared,
but obviously i was wrong,
cause you are no longer here...
one quick movement and i know ill be dead,
but i will miss you forever,
even in death,
where ever i go,
i will remember us together,
but i have to go now,
i hope you get this,
for its my suicide letter.
love me always and forever,
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Comments on this poem/writing:
| James (24.15.118.213) -- Wednesday, March 17 2004, 01:29 am It's one of my favorite one's that you wrote! |
| heaven (68.43.99.209) -- Wednesday, March 17 2004, 02:38 am thank's james im glad you like it~heaven |
| Sara (24.11.118.59) -- Thursday, March 18 2004, 12:38 am I realate 2 it it is so truthful |
| heaven (68.43.99.209) -- Thursday, March 18 2004, 12:59 am i think that alot of ppl. can relate .....thank you-heaven |
| will (69.148.134.233) -- Friday, March 19 2004, 10:39 pm good poem heaven i want to talk to u about it. |
| PoeticDemon (24.15.118.213) -- Monday, March 22 2004, 02:40 am I love this poem, its great keep up the good work i love you soo much Heaven! ~James~ |
| heaven (10.113.44.105) -- Tuesday, March 23 2004, 06:59 pm thanx alot you guys...love always~heaven |
| xx (172.150.132.213) -- Wednesday, March 24 2004, 05:03 am i like it |
| heaven (68.43.99.209) -- Monday, March 29 2004, 02:52 am thanx im so glad u like my poems...it really means alot!! |
| tripping (192.168.3.252) -- Tuesday, September 7 2004, 02:39 pm wow i relate to that so much. im feeling like that right now an di just cant seem to find a solution for it... maybe the razor would be a good idea. thanx for sharing your poem with us. you are a truly amazing writer. keep it up. |
| heaven (208.182.197.84) -- Monday, April 25 2005, 03:55 pm i aint been on in a while but if i had been then this response woulda came alot sooner...i truelly hope it aint too late....things do change .....and things will get better...dont die,not yet.... |
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