Your Daughter
17 February, 2004
Author: Heaven
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"then the girl lived happily ever after."my mom said then got up and straightened my covers.i wanted to tell her not to go,to stay in my room with me forever,but i knew she wouldnt understand,she had to get back to her lover. |
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Comments on this poem/writing:
| PoeticVamp (24.15.118.213) -- Friday, February 20 2004, 11:48 pm Great poem but... I love you so please dont commit suicide love always... -James- |
| heaven (68.43.99.209) -- Saturday, February 21 2004, 01:14 am james i love u 2.........and thanx |
| lester (208.54.197.118) -- Saturday, February 21 2004, 02:28 am great poem i wish i could write like you |
| Mark (66.75.77.195) -- Saturday, February 21 2004, 02:30 am DO NOT SUICIDE I Love You |
| heaven (68.43.99.209) -- Saturday, February 21 2004, 02:30 am thanxs alot.im sure u could write better than n-e one,if u found something u new and could write about.thanx alot-heaven- |
| heaven (68.43.99.209) -- Saturday, February 21 2004, 11:13 pm thanx alot thats very nice of u.i love u 2. |
| James (24.15.118.213) -- Monday, February 23 2004, 02:21 am Heaven i love this poem and i love you, Love always -James- |
| heaven (68.43.99.209) -- Monday, February 23 2004, 05:43 am james,i love u 2.thats very nice im glad u like my poems i like all of urs very much 2.i hope 1 day i will be a writter like u.-love heaven |
| xx (64.12.96.10) -- Sunday, February 29 2004, 03:12 am such great talent from such pain i am sorry there is a sickness amoung us that will kill us all if we let it its called stupidity from xx |
| Tricia (206.230.22.14) -- Sunday, February 29 2004, 05:20 am Hun, dont commit suicide, i know what you are feeling trust me if this poem is exactly true. Not saying you dont tell the truth but sometimes i write about situations i have not incountered. I pray noone has to go threw that and those who do find strength to move on. love you girl |
| heaven (68.43.99.209) -- Monday, March 1 2004, 11:40 pm thank you very much both of you.-heaven |
| will (69.148.134.233) -- Friday, March 19 2004, 10:41 pm well good but, didnt like the ending. |
| me again barb (209.112.22.235) -- Saturday, March 20 2004, 07:56 pm I went through that too but instead of thinking suicide, I thought I'll show you that I can be important. so I became a wifeat 19 and a mother at 21 and had a good life just to show them that no matter what I won't give up. I got mad at all trhe crap, but pretended like nothing bothered me. It ticked him off. remember the saying the best revenge is living well. |
| heaven (10.113.44.105) -- Tuesday, March 23 2004, 07:04 pm hey ..its not really a problem to me that your always puttin a comment.lol.i like it!!! oh my god barb..i will never get married!!excpecially that young!!!and i dont wanna have a kid!!ther's already so many kids in this world already that need a home and a place to live.if i want to get a kid i would just adopt.well,any ways you should wtite a book on your life!!it seems really interesting!!i would love to read it:) |
| barb (66.46.241.115) -- Thursday, March 25 2004, 05:28 am I 'm glad you don't mind me commenting.:) and the reason I let you know about marriage and parenthood was to let yo and others know that you make your own happiness. as far as me writing a book naw it would be boring I'm better at giving unwanted advice.lol |
| heaven (68.43.99.209) -- Friday, March 26 2004, 10:38 pm whatever your crazy!!!your advice is wanted!!i love hearing from you!and i dont think ur book would be boring!!you should write ne.lol.~heaven |
| barb (209.112.22.69) -- Saturday, March 27 2004, 04:11 am there are some true writers on here. ones that write from experiences. the real life feelings are what I like and you do it so well keep up the writing always be aware of yours and others feelings. Then you will never run out of poems. |
| heaven (68.43.99.209) -- Saturday, March 27 2004, 11:12 pm thank you so much for all of your advice.i really enjoy talking to you!!your like one of my best friends..and its strange cause i dont even really know you.i just know what you have and want to say.but i very much enjoy listening to what you have to say,well more like reading what you have to say.ha ha ha.well,bye bye.~heaven |
| barb (206.191.91.25) -- Tuesday, March 30 2004, 07:26 am good thing you have to read what I say because if I was talking you wouldn't listen you'd probably do what my kids do. yeh yeh yeh we know mom:)))) |
| heaven (68.43.99.209) -- Wednesday, March 31 2004, 12:11 am yea right!!i would love to have a mom like u!!i would prolly thank u everyday 4 your advise:)u seem like a realy kool person:) |
| barb (209.112.22.39) -- Wednesday, March 31 2004, 01:45 am thank-you for your comments. As far as being a cool mom, ask my kids, on second thought no don't.I was a worry wartover everything they did.Drove them nuts. Oh well.:))) |
| heaven (10.113.44.80) -- Wednesday, March 31 2004, 09:51 pm as far as all that goes i would love to have a mom that was actually conserned with what i did and wher i went all night and why i came home wearing different clothes and twitching from the drugs i was on...but im sure if i had ne1 in my life like you i wouldnt of been out side doing that stuff anyways.im not saying that its all my mom's fault and none mine....i knew what i was doing at first then i got kinda lost in it.....but im okay now.and all that is thanks to my grandma who keeps me prison and never lets me go any wher....i hate it ...i have no life.:( |
| barb (66.46.230.58) -- Wednesday, March 31 2004, 11:21 pm your grandma is giving you a life. protecting you. watching you like a hawk:) and you know that kids like you and the way I was,we need smebody to be firm with us or else they get walked all over. right? |
| HEAVEN (68.43.99.209) -- Saturday, April 3 2004, 11:45 pm barb, is ther ever an end to ur knowledge?:)(hahaha) |
| barb (66.46.241.76) -- Sunday, April 4 2004, 12:16 am nope I even surprise myself :)))) |
| brittany (205.188.117.9) -- Thursday, April 8 2004, 06:41 pm heaven you know we could not go on with out you so dont do something i would do |
| heaven (10.113.44.144) -- Monday, April 19 2004, 06:15 pm hey you guys sorry it took so long for me to get back to you.my comp is broken.but any ways thank you btittany.thats really sweet of you.and barb you are so crazy.(ha-ha)im glad you dont run out though cause then i would have no one to give it to me.~heaven |
| anonymous (10.113.44.79) -- Monday, May 24 2004, 03:04 pm that was really sad.i hope for who ever this poem is about things get better for them. |
| RainFlyer8 (69.81.41.22) -- Tuesday, March 1 2005, 06:05 am Heaven this is a great poem...I think you reviewed some of mine but if not oh well and I LOVED THIS! The way its written is awsome i look foward to reading more of your work! And just from the reviews and stuff i read up there it looks like u hav had a tough life so far and I admire you! It's people like you that come out the strongest in the end! And you know what i cant replace your mother but i can be your friend DONT COMMIT SUICIDE listen....Ive had at LEAST 10 suicidal freinds none them actually have...we helped them through it I am DEFINATLY going to pray for you (I'm not a religious nut just christian) But their are better ways...Like wat Barb did...show them that no matter what they did YOU prevailed with no help from them -RainFlyer A.K.A. Amber |
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