Run Away
17 February, 2004
Author: Heaven
in the silence of the night a child walks the streets,to scarred to stay ther.but to afraid to leave,she looks up at the skye,ond whipes her tears on her sleeve, |
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Comments on this poem/writing:
Mark (66.75.77.195) -- Saturday, February 21 2004, 02:10 am Hey Nice poem you know how to write good!!!!!!!! |
lester (208.54.197.118) -- Saturday, February 21 2004, 02:32 am this is a great poem i like this one the best |
heaven (68.43.99.209) -- Saturday, February 21 2004, 02:35 am thanx im glad u guys like them |
Internetfreak356 (68.249.2.132) -- Saturday, February 21 2004, 11:36 pm Dude that was awsome i dont know how u do it |
heaven (68.43.99.209) -- Sunday, February 22 2004, 12:34 am thanx alot,and its really easy to write a poem when u understand or have lived through what ur writting about.thanx,heaven |
Sara (24.11.118.59) -- Saturday, February 28 2004, 11:06 pm Ur the best at writing poems u almost made me cry! |
heaven (68.43.99.209) -- Saturday, February 28 2004, 11:10 pm thanx alot sara im glad iv touched some1 with my writting!-heaven |
xx (172.169.33.99) -- Sunday, February 29 2004, 05:51 am the best ones i like is i am sorry because it hit my heart and us ...i think ppl forget how it was to be a kid and how tuff it was trying to make ppl happy and takeing a bunch of crap from ppl that dont understand |
heaven (68.43.99.209) -- Monday, March 1 2004, 11:42 pm thank you very much im glad that you can understand wher i am coming from...heaven |
barb (209.112.22.78) -- Sunday, March 7 2004, 01:55 am heaven I read your poem and you wondered"WHY" things bad happen. If you didn't go through what you did you wouldn't have the talent for writing,that's the way I think anyways. our past makes us who we are good or bad :) good writing keep it up |
heaven (68.43.99.209) -- Tuesday, March 9 2004, 02:28 am thank you so much for reading my poems but i dont anybody should have to go through the things ive gone through...i think that i SHOULD be writting about sunshine and flowers and stuff like that...im only 14...no one this young should have to live my life...thanx for the words-heaven |
barb (209.112.22.39) -- Tuesday, March 9 2004, 03:10 pm heaven Ii was a runaway too at 12-14 years old I'm 50 years old now and believe me as you grow up and you can decide for yourself things get better. I ran away from home so much my adopted mother put me in reform school said I was uncontrolable duh :))) who wants to be controlled. |
barb (209.112.22.39) -- Tuesday, March 9 2004, 05:19 pm Heaven if you read my poem called FINISHING it explains how I felt when I was growing up. what I felt like as a kid. |
heaven (68.43.99.209) -- Thursday, March 11 2004, 12:02 am lol.wow,i can realate..i just got out of reform skool last year.it really.sucked so bad.and i will check out ur poem.thanx alot-heaven |
will (69.148.134.233) -- Friday, March 19 2004, 10:52 pm Awesome poem really liked it. |
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