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Run Away
17 February, 2004
Author: Heaven

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in the silence of the night a child walks the streets,to scarred to stay ther.but to afraid to leave,she looks up at the skye,ond whipes her tears on her sleeve,

this child is a run away.missing for 2 years,her mother never knew the truth about her daughters covered fears,

no one ever knew what her moms boyfriend would always do,they never took the time to listen,they will never know the truth,they will never know of the pain she had to live through,

so she ran away into the night,and never once looked back,she left her mom in confusion,she would never understand,

she walked into the street life,and didnt know what to do,she never would go back,thats all she knew was true,

she begged god"please lord help me,and take away my pain,how could u let this happen?it shattered my hopes and dreams,now ill never grow up to be what i wanted to be.please lord,god please help me."

..........she looked away from the skye,if ther was some one up ther why did they choose her to live this life? she didnt understand,maybe she would in time,

she walked under the street light,right out side her old home,her home of a darkened times,her home of pain and lies,she smiled cause she knew,she would never have to go through that again in her life.she watched a light flick on,and quietly whisered"forever goodbye."

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Comments on this poem/writing:

Mark (66.75.77.195) -- Saturday, February 21 2004, 02:10 am

Hey Heaven

Hey Nice poem you know how to write good!!!!!!!!
lester (208.54.197.118) -- Saturday, February 21 2004, 02:32 am

heaven

this is a great poem i like this one the best
heaven (68.43.99.209) -- Saturday, February 21 2004, 02:35 am

thanx alot u guys

thanx im glad u guys like them
Internetfreak356 (68.249.2.132) -- Saturday, February 21 2004, 11:36 pm

good job

Dude that was awsome i dont know how u do it
heaven (68.43.99.209) -- Sunday, February 22 2004, 12:34 am

thanx internetfreak

thanx alot,and its really easy to write a poem when u understand or have lived through what ur writting about.thanx,heaven
Sara (24.11.118.59) -- Saturday, February 28 2004, 11:06 pm

Heaven

Ur the best at writing poems u almost made me cry!
heaven (68.43.99.209) -- Saturday, February 28 2004, 11:10 pm

thanx alot sara

thanx alot sara im glad iv touched some1 with my writting!-heaven
xx (172.169.33.99) -- Sunday, February 29 2004, 05:51 am

its great

the best ones i like is i am sorry because it hit my heart and us ...i think ppl forget how it was to be a kid and how tuff it was trying to make ppl happy and takeing a bunch of crap from ppl that dont understand
heaven (68.43.99.209) -- Monday, March 1 2004, 11:42 pm

xx,

thank you very much im glad that you can understand wher i am coming from...heaven
barb (209.112.22.78) -- Sunday, March 7 2004, 01:55 am

you wonder

heaven I read your poem and you wondered"WHY" things bad happen. If you didn't go through what you did you wouldn't have the talent for writing,that's the way I think anyways. our past makes us who we are good or bad :) good writing keep it up
heaven (68.43.99.209) -- Tuesday, March 9 2004, 02:28 am

barb

thank you so much for reading my poems but i dont anybody should have to go through the things ive gone through...i think that i SHOULD be writting about sunshine and flowers and stuff like that...im only 14...no one this young should have to live my life...thanx for the words-heaven
barb (209.112.22.39) -- Tuesday, March 9 2004, 03:10 pm

be strong

heaven Ii was a runaway too at 12-14 years old I'm 50 years old now and believe me as you grow up and you can decide for yourself things get better. I ran away from home so much my adopted mother put me in reform school said I was uncontrolable duh :))) who wants to be controlled.
barb (209.112.22.39) -- Tuesday, March 9 2004, 05:19 pm

I forgot

Heaven if you read my poem called FINISHING it explains how I felt when I was growing up. what I felt like as a kid.
heaven (68.43.99.209) -- Thursday, March 11 2004, 12:02 am

barb

lol.wow,i can realate..i just got out of reform skool last year.it really.sucked so bad.and i will check out ur poem.thanx alot-heaven
will (69.148.134.233) -- Friday, March 19 2004, 10:52 pm

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Awesome poem really liked it.
 
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