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This Child
14 February, 2004
Author: Heaven

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your eyes are so innocent,so full of love,you dont understand that the world is evil and wrong,i wish i could make the world a better place for you to grow up.but i guess we all know that cannot be done.

i dont know how i could tell you about the pain you will soon endure,about the heartbreak you will suffer,about the evil temptations of the world,

i hope you will be strong,as strong as you can be,and though it will be hard i know you will suceed,you will live life to the fullest,and never give up on your dreams.you will make it in this life,you will make every thing okay!!!

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Comments on this poem/writing:

bench (192.168.0.172) -- Thursday, February 19 2004, 06:29 am

lovely!

what a beautiful peom to tell a newly born child! i can feel so much love in this poem!
heaven (68.43.99.209) -- Friday, February 20 2004, 12:28 am

thanx

thank you very much,bench
James (24.15.118.213) -- Monday, February 23 2004, 02:23 am

Great,

i really like it, you have alot of talent, keep it up!
Love always
-James-
heaven (68.43.99.209) -- Monday, February 23 2004, 05:40 am

thanx alot james

thanx james but u have much more talent then me.-heaven
xx (172.169.33.99) -- Sunday, February 29 2004, 05:27 am

things are all ways better from the heart

and you are all heart
heaven (68.43.99.209) -- Monday, March 1 2004, 11:37 pm

xx.

thank you very much...
xx (172.154.157.88) -- Tuesday, March 2 2004, 01:35 pm

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such talent needs such praise
heaven (68.43.99.209) -- Wednesday, March 3 2004, 02:01 am

xx,

thank you so much...im really glad you took the time to read my poems,as i said before...-heaven
will (69.148.134.233) -- Friday, March 19 2004, 10:35 pm

no title

good.
 
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