The Dark by Heaven

my life in the dark no longer exist when i sit in my room and start to adrift,i go too a place in my mind wher happiness is,

i go to the moon and visit the stars,i go to a place where all the angels are,

i go up to heaven,and visit my friends,then i go to the perfect home and my family kisses me and tucks me into bed...........

then saddly i let my dream come to an end,and im left alone in the dark again.....

Tammy (66.38.6.124) -- Monday, February 16 2004, 06:39 am

heaven
wow.... wonderful poem, I also like to drift off to that happy place sometimes. May the angels guide you to all the happiness you deserve!!!

heaven (68.43.99.209) -- Tuesday, February 17 2004, 11:00 pm

thanx tammy
thank u very much.and im glad sum 1 can realate.

lester (208.54.197.118) -- Saturday, February 21 2004, 02:22 am

badass
this was the best poem that i have heard in along time and i hope you go to the big time with your poems

heaven (68.43.99.209) -- Saturday, February 21 2004, 02:24 am

thanx lester....
thanx alot,im glad u like them.and i hope 2 take them far 2.-heaven-

Mark (66.75.77.195) -- Saturday, February 21 2004, 02:37 am

Nice
That's a nice poem

heaven (68.43.99.209) -- Saturday, February 21 2004, 11:21 pm

thanx mark
thanx mark

James (24.15.118.213) -- Monday, February 23 2004, 02:29 am

Nice
It's rhymes very nicley, i like it alot,
Love always
-James-

heaven (68.43.99.209) -- Monday, February 23 2004, 05:41 am

james,thanx
thanx alot im glad u like them and u took the time 2 read them.

Sara (24.11.118.59) -- Saturday, February 28 2004, 11:23 pm

Cool
man im glad im ur friend teach me plz?

heaven (68.43.99.209) -- Saturday, February 28 2004, 11:24 pm

sara
sara,im sure if u tried to write about some thing u understood then u would be a better writter then me!

xx (172.169.33.99) -- Sunday, February 29 2004, 05:30 am

such strong words from a child
but your a angel amongst childern when you speek your heart

heaven (68.43.99.209) -- Monday, March 1 2004, 11:38 pm

xx,
thank you very much.im glad that u like my poems and that u can see and understand wher i am coming from-heaven

will (69.148.134.233) -- Friday, March 19 2004, 10:36 pm

no title
same with me heaven loved that one.

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