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Your Promise
4 December, 2003
Author: Holly A. Badolato

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Last night I stayed awake,
Just thinking of you and me,
How you left me all alone
How you said you’d never leave.

I did everything you told me to do,
I gave you everything you needed,
But last night I called you house
And you told me I was conceded

I didn’t understand it then
I don’t understand it now,
How you had to throw your life away
I just don’t know how.

You told me that you loved me,
But how could you?
Because you did this stupid thing
I don’t know if I’ll ever forgive you.

So now I’m saying goodbye,
To the one that I adored
I’ll soon see you in that special place,
Right there with the lord.

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Comments on this poem/writing:

Terrie* (65.136.6.115) -- Tuesday, December 9 2003, 08:18 pm

Holly A. B

each of your writings were excellent...i enjoyed reading them..keep sharing..Happy Holidays...Terrie*
Leah06 (24.5.241.141) -- Saturday, January 24 2004, 12:17 am

another wow!

this poem is awsome too!!! i am so surprised, you shouldent feel bad about submitting your great poems. this is awsome!
KristyD. (12.176.64.48) -- Monday, February 23 2004, 11:31 pm

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Once again an excellent poem keep writing
 
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