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Sorry Love
13 September, 2002
Author: Hunter

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Take a look at me now.
Take a good look at what I have become.
See what you have created.
See what you have done.
My wrists are scared,
And my soul is barred.
I am a killer with no heart.
I live to tear this world apart.
I know it's been a while since you last saw me.
I know you thought that you were finally free.
Sorry to have to tell you,
Sorry love, your life is through.

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Comments on this poem/writing:

anonymous (208.254.109.22) -- Friday, March 28 2003, 07:15 pm

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i couldnt of said it better myself!
Christina Boyer (68.112.230.120) -- Tuesday, April 22 2003, 10:20 pm

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that was beautiful! write more
zoe (12.210.197.108) -- Saturday, April 26 2003, 12:20 am

powerful

that's sad and you need help you shouldnt a cut urself dude
selene delgado (67.74.190.232) -- Wednesday, May 28 2003, 07:38 pm

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oh my god i;m a poem writer my self and i;m just 12 years old and that was good but next time put a littel bit of more sadness in it ans you do what your doing cuz it coming out great
Dana (152.163.252.35) -- Thursday, September 11 2003, 08:40 pm

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By just reading this poem, I have just remembered my dreadful past. This is a good poem... write more!
Felicia (198.109.235.254) -- Monday, October 30 2006, 03:06 pm

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That was good but not something you should be saying but i kno how if feels i used to be that way.:(
 
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