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Eternal Solitude
13 September, 2002
Author: Hunter

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Lonely as I am,
It stays the same.
Lonely as I am,
There is only me to blame.
I still can feel,
I simply don't share,
The pain is real,
Of this I surely am aware.
Lonesome me,
Solitude my only friend.
Breaking free,
Would be my end.
Emotions blocked,
And feelings numb.
I long for you,
But what's done is done.

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Comments on this poem/writing:

Pamela (66.38.146.43) -- Sunday, September 15 2002, 10:12 pm

Beautiful

Simple, to the point, and yet abstract with deeper meaning. Beautiful poem, and a powerful finishing line to boot.
leah (66.222.217.200) -- Tuesday, November 18 2003, 02:32 am

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i luv ur poems!
 
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