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Blinded
20 August, 2002
Author: Tonette

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Thou I seek but never find.
Thou I speak but never heard.
Thou I care but never spared.
Thou I love but never been loved.

Let things be, in what in me.
Let what I supposed to be.
Let me love the way I do.
For loving you, is all I can do.

Inspite of all, I've was a fool.
Despite of all, I lost control.
Through it all, I still believe.
Even though he always deceive.

I've been blinded in what I see.
I've been blocked in where I'm supposed to be.
I can't take it no more, I can't give anymore.
I can't be what you wished to be, cause I'm always me.

Let it stop!, make me stop!, why can't I stop?
Let me be what I'm supposed to be.
Let me just love the way I do.
For loving you is all I can do.

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Comments on this poem/writing:

stephanie (24.229.104.9) -- Monday, December 9 2002, 09:47 pm

thou loves it..

your poem is really good, and if you can send me a copy, it would be great! bye bye!
kim (208.254.109.93) -- Friday, December 20 2002, 10:22 pm

just like me

it remeinds me of me and the way i feel
crystal (208.254.109.22) -- Wednesday, April 16 2003, 06:41 pm

*crystal*

great poem, it reminds me so much of myself, i felt blinded at one point in my life, but ive opened my eyes! great poem!
Grobler Kruger (196.7.216.162) -- Friday, August 29 2003, 02:15 pm

Great poem

this is a very very nice poem, so much depth in combination with love and hate contrasts. I just love it. Do you think you can send me a copy?
Him (67.104.223.159,) -- Wednesday, December 10 2003, 10:05 am

the way

Then just let ME love you and I will show you the Way.
 
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