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Korea
18 November, 2002
Author: J.

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and in your dark eyes
I see myself and feel uncomfortable
in my own skin
and in you foriegn arms i cry
i feel myself all too well inside
against you

and when the walls come closing in
i think of you and i hurt again
and again
i was trying to feel a little loved
but i guess you were flying too high above
for me

korea,korea
before i see you again
before i see you again (I'm dead)

and in my eyes
you're too valuble to stay
with me
and in my arms
you'll push away in time
from me

and when the walls are closing in
i think of you and i hurt again
and again
i was trying to feel a little loved
but i guess you were flying too high above
for me

korea, korea
before i see you again
before i see you again (i'm dead)

vinebar

Comments on this poem/writing:

blake (165.199.3.42) -- Wednesday, March 5 2003, 05:51 pm

good

wow that was awsome
Lauren (24.174.36.104) -- Thursday, August 7 2003, 04:40 am

Nicely done.

Very good. Seems...hmm. heh Good stuff.
 
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