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Forever
21 October, 2002
Author: J.

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walking empty streets memories come confused
internally falling apart i wander broken and bruised
in between these rainy days and broken dreams
something in me keeps me moving on through everything
sick of my part in this tradgedy i'm played out
corrupted by mortality i shoulda stayed out
when did everything become so strange?
seems nothing ever stays the same

to channel this violence, a lurking malevolence
to blind my senses and take peace in the silence
i hold within a means to an end
alone in this world, streets i walk my only friend
continously fighting these homicidal tendencies
losing this war spreading deep inside of me
cut myself open and let thoughts fly free
look into my eyes and see what i see

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Comments on this poem/writing:

Pamela (66.38.146.67) -- Thursday, October 24 2002, 02:57 am

Sweet!

I love the song! I love it, I listen to it over and over again - are you the singer cuz I am in love with that voice....
Anyways, the lyrics ar powerful to say the least - they are more then just words to me :o)
J. (209.214.52.22) -- Thursday, October 24 2002, 04:34 am

Pamela

um... thanks:) and yes i am the singer guy for D13 (although both me and seizure do vocals now)
Pamela (66.38.146.67) -- Friday, October 25 2002, 12:33 am

Gotta say

Well, you guys are awesome, you keep makin' em and I'll keep listenin / readin' em.
And seriously, wicked voice....
Heather (68.10.199.51) -- Sunday, November 3 2002, 01:52 am

thats good...

HEY THATS REALLY GOOD. I LIKE.. ITS HOT AND I KNOE WATCHA MEAN BY THE STREETS. ITS COOL
HEAVEN (68.43.99.209) -- Monday, December 22 2003, 06:15 am

THATS DEEP..........

SOMETHING LIKE THAT MAKES ME THINK .......ITS DEEP
 
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