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Our Christ
17 February, 2002
Author: Joseph James Prena

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Died for us,
Cried for us,
Loved us!
And in return we crucified him,
Not knowing we would be in eternal darkness for what we did.
He showed us our inner light but we still
That shows how despicable we really are.
But we can over come our evil now and live in prosperity,
Life is gold and is spent every second,
I love him but I know he hates us,
I know I would.
But still He forgave.
But after all these wars we have had, are we still forgiven?

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Comments on this poem/writing:

JesusFreak (66.122.55.76) -- Wednesday, April 2 2003, 03:51 pm

His love

God loves us and Jesus loves us. He loves us unconditionally. HE never hated us and never will. And he forgave, all we have to do is accept His awesome forgiveness so we can acheive heaven.
Your poem is great and it portrays this. I admire your bravery to write it. I know some people persecute others for such poems
Tiff (198.111.241.18) -- Thursday, January 22 2004, 05:02 am

Um

I didn't like you poem at all. It totally contradicts itself in every single way!!! God does love us no matter what and he will keep on loving us forever!! A simple war isn't going to keep him from loving us !! I know it is none of my business but are you even a christian? Or haven't you read your Bible lately?? I believe that this poem needs to be rewritten or burned. It makes me angry that it is even on this page!! You are giving people the wrong thought of God, and are confusing most. Sorry didn't like your poem. Tiffany
jenie banzali (192.168.0.32) -- Thursday, June 24 2004, 09:27 am

i like it,& i would like to copy for it.

i admire your poem and i would to have a copy for it,pls. allow me.have a blessed day!GOD BLESS YOU!!!
Emilee (12.223.196.102) -- Thursday, June 24 2004, 10:43 pm

ya

I like it for the fact that it is about Jesus and how He died for us. But, Jesus will always love us. And His forgivness never ever ends. i think maybe you should pray and straighten things out with God. God bless ya~emilee
 
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