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Beautiful One
8 November, 2001
Author: Josh Bartolomucci

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The sun shines down so bright
My eyes are blinded by the light

The wind blows softly upon my face
When I look at you my dear
I am showered with grace

The boat floats gently down the river
I could stay in this moment with you forever

The sun soon starts to set
The shadows of the buildings
Hide the light just a little bit

Soon the sun is fully gone
But the boat still floats on
The only light that can be seen
Comes from the candles on the edge of the stream

I take a deep breath
And stare at the sky
I push back the hair
From in front of your eyes

There is nothing better than this
I now know what beauty is

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Comments on this poem/writing:

andy whitley (192.168.4.78) -- Thursday, May 13 2004, 03:53 pm

its dumb and horrible

just kidding josh i typed your name on google and theres like a bunch of listings I wish I was famous
LinzAy (24.27.237.195) -- Thursday, May 13 2004, 05:36 pm

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Good visual poetry. Nice flow:)
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