Poetic Dreams - Other's Poems - Avenger Of Blood - Part Two - by: Justus Isaiah Richardson - submitted: 24 November 2003

She was in the hospital for three weeks.
Traumatized so badly she hardly speaks!
There’s a pin in her leg and one in her jaw!
A crime you’ll have to answer for with the law.
That physical therapy you’re going through,
Is nothing compared to what I’ll do to you,
If anything like this happens again,
The last word out of your mouth should be amen.
‘Cause homie don’t play around with child abuse,
You can’t come up with a good enough excuse,
To justify doing that to your own child!
What did she do to you to be so reviled?!
So just understand, for as long as I live,
I will be watching you, and I don’t forgive.
If you wanna lash out, then come spar with me.
You might even get to land a blow or three.
But the child is off limits, as is your wife,
I will be watching for the rest of your life!
I hate child abuse, it is a coward’s way!
And that is why they had to carry you away!
So remember, if it makes you feel like a stud,
You’ll soon have to face the Avenger Of Blood!

Meridian (172.134.93.199) -- Wednesday, January 19 2005, 09:33 pm

I say amen too
Amen to this poem! Children shouldn't have to go through abuse. They should enjoy their childhood, instead of fearing for their lives!
I absolutely agree and love the words you've typed!

Smiley face,
Meri

chloe (165.146.100.16) -- Thursday, February 17 2005, 03:05 pm

perfect
Most sequels to poems arent very good and they get misleading but this is just perfect. You rock!

Tainted Innocence (205.188.116.203) -- Sunday, December 4 2005, 01:17 am

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rock on man! Its nice to know that there are people who stand up for things. And i love the way you wrote the poem.

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