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Painful Suicide
18 July, 2002
Author: Kami

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Pain is everything that cause your anger.
Although you can't feel the blade, you can vision what caused you to do this.
In the deepest depth of your heart, you know what you are doing is wrong.
never knowing why youy keep on going.
foregetting everything and everyone around.
understanding nothing you cut deeper.
love is something noone ever taughtyou.

So you keep on cutting.
Under-estimating everything you cut until the blood is gushing, instead of drizzling.
Ignoring everything your still still going at it.
Cutting deeper now at another angle.
Instead of slowing down you go faster.
Doing nothing people just stand and watch.
Everything is gone now as you fade away to death.

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Comments on this poem/writing:

Brooke (156.63.181.3) -- Monday, February 23 2004, 05:04 am

Like ur poem

I really like this poem.It reminds me of when i was doing stuff like that because of life. It was like u read my mind it u wrote a poem about it! Thank u for letting me write to u! U should stick P.S. u should write more..
emily (68.113.77.109) -- Wednesday, July 26 2006, 02:53 am

this was my life

i loved your poem i would appreciate it if you would let me use your poem to show my friend who is currently a cutter?
 
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