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Grandfather
5 December, 2001
Author: Kami

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As I see him lay ther in dismay.
I hope he looks forward to going away.
He was a good man in his life.
But I am sad to see him lay there in this strife.
I see his eye's light brown filled with haze,
as he try's to focus and gaze.
He was my one and only Papa Bear.
As I grasp his hand I say to myself
this isn't fair!!!!!!!!!!!

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Lil miss tears (205.188.192.164) -- Wednesday, August 14 2002, 02:18 am

i still care , and understand

hey there,
I understand your feelings. I once was your friend to understand how you felt . I think you forgot because I left. remember always like we said guys come and go homies are forever. keep that saying alive . Im here for you just remember that. we have been through alot and not a day goes by that i don't think of you. i miss you alot.
your friend as i remember
Tiffany
aka
Lil miss tears
Mary Sue Harper (65.141.205.107) -- Saturday, November 30 2002, 07:44 pm

I love the poem.

I felt the exact same way before and after my father died.
Hottie 08 (65.90.149.58) -- Sunday, March 9 2003, 04:33 am

This poem is so sweet, it made me cry.

I felt the same way when my grandfather died. I screamed my head off because it was hard losing him. All my family changed when he past away. I hope your family got through it cause my family did and now we see eachother more then what we use to.
Mel_So_Beautiful (68.3.174.56) -- Sunday, August 24 2003, 05:30 am

It made me cry

I did feel the same way when my grandfater was dieing , i was with him till he took his last breath and i held his hand and said the same thing
KitKatrina (68.116.64.38) -- Monday, August 25 2003, 05:08 pm

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This poem reminds me of my dad..He passed away, but everything you said, I could say for him as well..I'm sorry!
georgiapeachy (167.197.97.168) -- Tuesday, October 21 2003, 06:34 pm

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I didn't watch my grandfather die. He was killed in a car wreck and died instantly and he was the only Papa I had left. It happened on September 2002 and over a year later I still dont understand why. My boyfriend was the same way in November 2002 and I have to agree with the poem. IT ISN'T FAIR.
NIKKI (199.80.82.66) -- Tuesday, July 17 2007, 12:24 am

SO HARD TO FORGET

I was there the day my grandfather died and i can't get that sick feeling out of my stomach it hurt so bad. i love him more than my real father. I don't know if i'll ever get over that. feeling
 
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