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Death 2
4 December, 2001
Author: Kami

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Death is my wish for life.
It ends all the pain and strife.
Death for some cause's relief.
For others it cause's grief.
the day I wished I had died,
is the day my grandfather died.
I wish this wasn't true.
As his spirit flew.
As I cried and cried,
I wish that i had died.

------- Author's Notes -------

This is for all those peoples whom has lost a loved one

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Comments on this poem/writing:

Mary (65.141.205.194) -- Saturday, November 30 2002, 06:50 pm

I loved the poem!!!

I loved your poem. That is exactly how I felt and sometimes still do. The only difference is that my father died not my grandfather. Keep writing I love the poetry.
 
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