As If I Care by Kami

I tried to end my life.
But nothing seems to work.
Not even this knife.
I see this blade so sharp and swift.
As it cuts the skin my spirit lifts.
I see the blood run down as it stains my skin.
After that everyone was wearing black pins.

It seems the cut was so DEEP.
My life i could not keep.

Max (210.84.176.140) -- Sunday, August 11 2002, 09:31 am

i feel the expression you communicate
i know that feeling the way a knife will cut what restricts me from floating free it lasts for a while.. just long enough for me to remember who i am do you understand?
that's all i wanted to say

*nicki* (64.19.82.99) -- Friday, August 23 2002, 04:15 pm

LiFe
I like this poem a lot, I can relate to it almost 100%!

ryan (24.153.177.14) -- Friday, February 14 2003, 04:36 am

i dont know how to explian it im havin a bad night and feel like cutting so im reading all the cuttin peoms to try to help me not and so far its working i really liked this one means alot to me

danielle. v (10.80.1.100) -- Tuesday, May 13 2003, 05:37 pm

why?
well i kno why , why u do it b/c i dothe same thing everynight and it only helps for a few seconds then the pain is stillthere.

danielle (10.80.1.100) -- Tuesday, May 13 2003, 05:41 pm

call

sarah (68.111.9.235) -- Tuesday, November 4 2003, 06:05 am

good
i could see myself doing this to myself its deep and dark

chloe (165.146.100.16) -- Thursday, February 17 2005, 03:18 pm

been there did that
You explain that so well and the truth hurts doesnt it?

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