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Missing You
6 June, 2000
Author: Kat

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Last night as I was getting ready for bed,
I had this weird feeling in my head,
For some reason I was thinking of you,
My mind was wondering back in time,
Back to the day when you were mine,

I could see the first time we kissed,
That day left me in bliss,
I saw the times we use to sit and talk,
The time we held hands and went for a walk

I could heard the words we would say,
"I love you forever and a day"
I saw your face,
I could still feel your arms around me in your embrace,

I could hear your laugh oh so sweet,
I could feel the love that made me complete,
But I also saw that last day,
The day that you walked away,

Once again I felt the pain,
And the tears that fell like rain,
I could hear the slam of the door,
And the words " I don't love you anymore"

I don't know what made me think of you,
Or what we went through,
I guess I was
missing you ....

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Comments on this poem/writing:

Very Sad Girl (64.12.96.137) -- Friday, November 15 2002, 04:53 am

wonderful

Thank you very much for writing that Poem Kat. It's exactly how i feel, my b/f dumped me about a month ago on out one YEAR anniversary, out of no where he just says he doesnt love me anymore, but i dont understand how that could happen. I often think about him and the days we used to have. The poem described almost all of my feelings, thank you again. and i am sorry for your loss then too.
akire (203.167.92.2) -- Friday, August 8 2003, 04:33 am

how sad it was!!!!!!!!!!

we are on the same shoe. . I went home from work, lay in bed, think of the happy times with my former love then at the end i cry myself to sleep, damn hatred and pain.
Melisa Miller (152.163.252.129) -- Friday, August 8 2003, 08:01 am

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Very Good. Keep up the awesome work.
 
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