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Bullying
18 May, 2003
Author: Keila

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walking through the darkness
under the night sky
thinking of my problems
and asking myself why
do i have to be here
to suffer like i do?
do i need to live my life
each day through and through
i know i dont belong
no matter how i try
so now i have to waste my time
saying my goodbyes
you've forced me to this bitter end
you all know who you are
so think that when you're bullying;
it leaves an emotional scar

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Comments on this poem/writing:

ems (205.188.208.134) -- Wednesday, May 28 2003, 10:01 pm

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good one! i can totally relate to what you are writing in this poem. nice job
Seizure (68.19.11.127) -- Wednesday, July 30 2003, 02:51 pm

nice flow...

I'm a fan of good flow in poetry, and this one definately had it. It was a good message and well written... good job there Keila.
keila (195.93.33.14) -- Tuesday, August 19 2003, 08:22 pm

omg!!!

YAY!! I feel so.....flattered (!) that seizure read this! Thanks, man!
Keila (195.93.33.14) -- Sunday, September 7 2003, 05:25 pm

Ems

thanks!
Sophie (217.44.68.111) -- Sunday, September 21 2003, 09:37 pm

Wow...

Wow- this is a brilliant poem :)
Britany Walker (66.244.0.36) -- Thursday, November 20 2003, 06:31 pm

GREAT JOB!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

that was an excallent job....i love the way you put your words in perspective....and made it flowe really well.....check out my poems.....later dayz......

Agian GREAT JOB!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Holly A. Badolato (12.34.167.95) -- Thursday, January 8 2004, 07:06 am

GOOD!!!

You did an excellent job on this poem...i had a friend kill himself over bullying and it hurts to know that people still bully knowing what it does...they dont understand what it does to people but one day they will learn that we are all the same...thanks for reminding people that...good job
Vicky (213.48.1.72) -- Friday, February 27 2004, 06:26 pm

Well Done

I am a teacher, who has been bullied myself at school, it's great to spread the raw emotion and touch peoples heart with then dreadful monster,,, that is bullying!
Meridian (152.163.252.104) -- Tuesday, March 23 2004, 04:59 pm

Well said!

I know how you feel about being bullied, cause I was too. Wounds like these are permanent like you've stated in your poem! This is a brilliant poem, and so very true! Bullying stings!
becky (10.133.168.51) -- Friday, May 13 2005, 02:22 pm

well done

well done
sarah (194.82.192.7) -- Tuesday, September 13 2005, 02:15 pm

can i .....

can i copy and paste your poem onto microsoft word to use as part of a dance piece?
sammie an emma (195.8.175.4) -- Thursday, October 6 2005, 11:53 am

i feel sorry

i dont see the point in bullyin whats the point in doing it u just hurt ppl and them cry sometimes they even die u wouldnt like to be bullyed its not very nice so stop it this instant an dont make ppl cry
jada (161.184.232.63) -- Sunday, October 23 2005, 05:40 pm

great job

good job on writen this poem it is one of the better ones iv ever read and it was touched my heart couse i to have been bullied all through school!
mcheal (213.122.29.181) -- Saturday, January 14 2006, 04:06 pm

bullying

Bullying is a very strong subject because iused to be a bully but i neva realised it left an emotional scar i just fort of it as fun so thank you for changing my ways.
chloe (88.108.131.59) -- Monday, November 20 2006, 10:40 pm

wow!

hi u don't know me but i think your poem if a wonder hit to them bullies! i know exactly how you feel! i've never heared such a powerful really hitting poem great job! i'll be telling everone about this! my english teachers everything!
chloeand nell (81.100.111.236) -- Saturday, November 17 2007, 06:32 pm

excellent

i dont see the point of bullying or anything like it.It is just hurting other people's feelings
Olivia (142.46.4.94) -- Wednesday, January 9 2008, 02:51 am

I loved it

I think your poem is amazing can i borrow it for starting my speech on bullying
lauren (82.47.61.156) -- Monday, November 24 2008, 07:18 pm

it was great

thankyou i have been looking for a good poem to help me make my own poem and now ive found it i have to present it to my class and tell them who help me or who written it and ill mention this thanks very much
Alex (123.211.162.54) -- Wednesday, March 11 2009, 10:27 am

please

can i pleaseborrow this poem for my school assignment? its very inspiring
elisha wright (84.71.148.130) -- Saturday, November 21 2009, 04:07 pm

is this true

if this true i am so sorry if not i love youre words omg it is so good
elisha wright (84.71.148.130) -- Saturday, November 21 2009, 04:10 pm

omg soz about last comment didnt get to finish

this is so good can i use it for homework u rule!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
iraqi sunni star (82.29.101.125) -- Thursday, February 18 2010, 12:33 pm

wow

i
love your poem i wish i am gifted at poetry likeyou
Tremain (124.187.111.35) -- Tuesday, October 5 2010, 06:12 am

omg

so good
 
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