Teen Pregnancy
18 May, 2003
Author: Keila
sitting in the darkness
my back facing the door
why cant life go back
to the way it was before?
i dont want this baby
but what else can i do?
should it be aborted
or should i suffer through?
no one knows the way i feel
and no one understands
telling me what i should do
and pulling at my hands
this thing inside is eating me
inside through to out
im made to keep it quiet
when i need to scream and shout
if you had the key
would you let me go?
to escape my ruined life
thats turned into a show
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Comments on this poem/writing:
| Seizure (68.19.11.127) -- Wednesday, July 30 2003, 02:54 pm Well, while you put the necessary emotion in there to let people know what you're feeling... this is definately one poem I can't relate to for obvious reasons. I would say what I would suggest you do, but that's not my business there, so good luck with that. Good poem. |
| MartinV (171.75.220.159) -- Wednesday, July 30 2003, 04:48 pm Keila, Fear is a harsh reality of life, and I'm sure you feel a lot of that right now. The wonderful part about your current situation is, this.You are not alone, your body shelters, the love and affection that you want. Perhaps, you can share that with your unborn child, as it is being shared with you, from within? Think about it, you are not alone. Your poem is about life, I love that. MartinV |
| Ben (67.123.244.245) -- Wednesday, July 30 2003, 07:00 pm A tough choice is in front of you, judging by this poem. The words tell a lot. As the dad of some beautiful girls who could have been aborted, but weren't, this touches me. I wish the best for you and your baby. Thanks!! |
| keila (195.93.33.11) -- Tuesday, August 19 2003, 08:25 pm thanks guys, im honured (sp?) that you read it! |
| keila (195.93.33.11) -- Wednesday, August 27 2003, 04:32 pm hey, seizure, could you tell me what you think i should do? I'd appreciate it... |
| Seizure (68.155.222.214) -- Wednesday, August 27 2003, 05:39 pm I could tell you, but not on the public web site. I will in an email or something. |
| keila (195.93.33.11) -- Thursday, August 28 2003, 04:56 pm okay, whatevers good with you....you've got my AOL screen name, I guess you could tell me there? |
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