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This Window
22 March, 2004
Author: Keith

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Alone I sit
Looking through this window
Wishing for a new life
Wanting something more
Watching happy people
Go about their happy lives
Smiling and laughing
Without a care in the world
As I sit and look
I watch the world pass me by
I picture a new life
One with bright days
Filled with happy memories
With parents who care
A friend who understands
A future that is clear
But it's a fantasy world
That cannot be
So alone I sit
Looking through this window

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Comments on this poem/writing:

Tammy (66.38.5.219) -- Tuesday, March 23 2004, 03:38 am

Good Poem

I truely liked this poem...I remember times when I have felt this way. Great Job, keep writing, love your work
Meridian (152.163.252.136) -- Tuesday, March 23 2004, 04:32 pm

Keith........

I ponder too. I love to dream about things I can relate. My dreams might be to just hang out on planet Mars or something, anything to help me find relief, and find my true self.

Another Divine Poem Keith!
 
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