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Giving In
9 February, 2004
Author: KitKatrina

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I’m giving up,
Not coming back,
Forget this life,
It’s all such crap,
I’ve tried so hard,
To always be,
The kind of person,
That’s not like me,
I’ve cried too much,
I’ve lost the same,
And there’s no one,
I can really blame,
Friends aren’t helping,
It’s what they made,
But I’ve given love,
It’s not a fair trade,
Give love to receive,
Just one thing,
You know what I got?
They gave me pain,
So forget it now,
I’m just giving in,
I don’t care anymore,
For the crap I'm in,
They say they don’t care,
But what if I died,
Would they care then?
And wish they had tried?
Well then watch me,
I’m saying goodbye,
There’s no use for life,
So I might as well die…

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Choker (24.239.89.85) -- Sunday, July 2 2006, 03:57 pm

damn

I think its f***ing true. Sad, but true.
 
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