I've Lost You
4 November, 2003
Author: KitKatrina
Too many tears shed,
Too many nights gone,
Not enough said,
Makes it hard to move on,
I’ve lost you.
Too many days spent alone,
Too many unshared feelings,
Not enough love shown,
So where’s the healing?
I’ve lost you.
How can one keep faith?
And still move on,
I’m stuck in a day,
And the nights are gone,
I’ve lost you.
When will I heal?
When will it come?
How will I feel?
Why must I run?
I’ve lost you.
You’re gone already,
No goodbyes said,
I wasn’t ready,
But time is dead,
I’ve lost you.
Too confused to understand,
Why this happened to me,
Just let me feel your hand,
You let go, now you’re free,
So why did I lose you?
------- Author's Notes -------
This is for my daddy, the greatest. Just me rambling on about mixed up feelings |
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Comments on this poem/writing:
| Sarah Taurus (64.57.107.116) -- Wednesday, November 5 2003, 08:36 pm Wow!!! this is a WOW!!! poem... it is so creative and I try to feel the feelings that you feel when i read this and it is so sad and yet so depressing i love you Trina and i hope that i see you this weekend... we will go to a movie okay? love you, Channel |
| KitKatrina (68.113.60.103) -- Thursday, November 6 2003, 12:23 am Thank you Sarah. I've got you hooked on the dots don't I?...J/k. Yeah this weekend we will go to a movie because don't forget I leave for Hawaii Sunday. I'll miss you, but I'll call you from there. Love you lots and keep commenting and writing poems of your own. Muah ~Gucci |
| Terrie* (65.148.233.40) -- Thursday, November 6 2003, 06:52 pm (wiping tear from eye) Kit...this is sooo sad...sweetie life is hard to understand...i know you miss you dad..and i know deep in my heart that you will forever feel his presence even more so when you write your poems.....beautiful poem.... |
| KitKatrina (68.113.60.103) -- Saturday, November 22 2003, 05:56 am Terrie I'd like to thank you for going and reading most of the poems and commenting on them like you said you would. For some reason when I get a comment from you, that's when I realize that my poem was well written and strong, or just the basic good. So thanks again for taking your time and commenting on my poems, it means a whole whole whole lot to me. ~Trina |
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