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God's Children
31 October, 2003
Author: KitKatrina

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How many children must we see die?
Before we lend a helping hand,
How come no one ever even tries?
Somebody please help me understand,
I watch the news and even hear stories,
About these children dying everyday,
As I hear the stories I’m filled with sadness,
I’m speechless and have nothing to say,
I feel for these children and pray for them too,
I send them my best wishes all the time,
I really don’t even know what to do,
When I know all these children aren’t fine,
They’re suffering, sick, and all alone,
I wish I could show them my love,
Maybe my future is still unknown,
And one day I’ll show them some love,
Oh God please watch over these kids,
Show them what love really is,
Please help them like I wish I could,
And show them what my love really is,
God Bless all the children that need be blessed,
Make them feel wanted and needed here,
Let these children finally rest,
And rid their eyes of every single tear,
Children my love is with you now,
I hope you can feel it in the air,
I know that God is with you somehow,
And just know that I truly care!

------- Author's Notes -------

Please pray for all the children of the world, as they need our prayers so much. Every prayer that we send their way is greatly appreciated. Thank you ~KitKatrina

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Comments on this poem/writing:

Sarah Taurus (64.57.107.116) -- Wednesday, November 5 2003, 08:49 pm

Gucci..

Trina, i really feel for this poem because its sad when there are kids and adults dying everyday, and it doesn't seem like anyone is doing anyhting about it, sure the adds are on television and you feel for them but are you really making that call that could go to one or many more children... the truth is i don't even know if that money goes to those poor children, to get the nutrition that they need, and about all of them are infected with HIV a sad word that kills thousands every year wheather it be in America or Africa or Japan... thanks again, Channel
KitKatrina (68.113.60.103) -- Thursday, November 6 2003, 12:34 am

Chanel...

Yeah I know, it's so depressing. People are out buying million dollar houses and hot new cars, when they already have like 10. Instead, they could using that money to help feed starving children in Africa, Japan, etc. I got this poem idea from a Michael Jackson music video, you know I love michael. So it just kind of inspired me to write about it. I pray for these children and adults everyday though and I hope many others do the same. Maybe when we become "famous" sarah, we'll go to Africa and diff. continents around the world and start a corporation to feed the children + adults of the world. God Bless all of them. Thanks again Sarah, Gucci
Terrie* (65.148.211.240) -- Thursday, November 6 2003, 09:45 pm

SOOO SAD BUT...SOOOOOO TRUE...

yea when ever i see such things it draws a well of tears to my eyes...i must give a thumbs up for many Doctors and Nurses whom dedicate some of their hours to the third world countries...as well as the missionaries that supply comfort for the many...and also to the many that volunteer in the homeless shelters....must i add i give you also the thumbs up for thinking of them..ya know ya do not have to be famous to start an organization..all ya need is the desire to find some one willing to invest into it...i know ya can do it....someday i will about it...
Terrie* (65.148.214.204) -- Thursday, November 6 2003, 10:34 pm

oops!

duhhh..that is so like me..i excluded one wordat the bottom of my comment....sorry
"someday i will read about it" now that makes more sense...even if i don't :)
Brittany (172.5.102.150) -- Monday, November 10 2003, 05:13 pm

tru tru

trina thats a very good oem, but as sarah states her opinion about that, i know you cre just as every other person does but thats really the states thing and its nice to help them but they are not the only ones suffering and theres peolpe on the streets, kids dropped out, girls regnant, thats the other stuff we should prey about babies born with problems.. Brittany M.
Rosha AKA Sha (152.163.252.164) -- Tuesday, December 9 2003, 11:21 pm

I like that

I really like that poem,because things do happen like you said.I pick your poem for my favorite poems for Written Communication
 
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