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Just A Dream
15 August, 2003
Author: KitKatrina

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Hair in a locket,
Memory on a chain,
Sand in my pocket,
This is memory lane,
Out on the beach,
With sun in my eyes,
You in my reach,
And the clear blue skies,
The ocean before us,
The waves so tall,
There is no rush,
No rush at all,
Birds flying above,
Crabs down below,
A beautiful white dove,
A crab pinching my toe,
Laughter all around,
Your brown eyes that glow,
Your frowns upside down,
Your face I do know,
Mist from the water,
Sun beating down,
As we see an otter,
Flapping all around,
All this time with you,
Makes me feel so good,
I hope you feel it too,
This feeling understood,
As I open my eyes,
I realize it was a dream,
But the dream was no lie,
Everything is what it seemed,
This was no dream just a memory,
Of how things used to be,
Everything was so clear,
Everything I could see,
Memory lane is in my thoughts,
As you are in them too,
They reside in a special spot,
In my heart just like you….

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Comments on this poem/writing:

Terrie* (65.148.211.207) -- Saturday, October 18 2003, 02:00 am

POWERFUL....

this is an awesome poem.....
Martin Vann (171.75.220.221) -- Saturday, October 18 2003, 04:45 pm

Soft and nice, thanks for letting us walk with you

KitKatrina,

Very soft and warm. Without our dreames and memories, I don't we could exist. Thanks for letting me walk with you, I feel refreshed and good.

MartinV
LuLu (12.238.20.229) -- Monday, October 20 2003, 10:31 pm

Different

This is a different poem, but I love it! Good job
KitKatrina (68.113.60.103) -- Tuesday, October 21 2003, 06:23 am

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I really appreciate all the comments you send my way. Some, more than others, brighten up my day when I read them. Just hearing that someone likes what I had to say is awesome. So thanks again, your kind words are remembered! ~Katrina
 
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