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Fantasy Land
22 July, 2003
Author: KitKatrina

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I stare at the first star of the night,
Admiring the way it shines so bright,
I hope you are looking at it too,
Together we stare into the night of blue,
Mr. Moon is out and he's smiling at me,
I wish I were him just floating and free,
No worries, no troubles, no nothing at all,
Just me in the sky not able to fall,
It begins to rain but I sit and dream,
Of all the rain forming a stream,
I watch each raindrop fall to the ground,
I sit and listen and admire the sound,
The sound of the rain fills my head,
So I fantasize more, but of trees instead,
I stare at the big green apple tree,
Just standing tall in front of me,
In a way he is smiling as well,
But then again it's hard to tell,
The leaves begin swaying as one,
They dance together and sing to the sun,
I've daydreamed so long morning is here,
But for some reason I just don't care,
I watch the sunrise with colors so bright,
Mixing together and making such light,
Soon I realize my life is waiting for me,
But it's nice to escape and just feel free,
So when you feel like this think of these things,
And you'll be surprised by the joy it brings!

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Comments on this poem/writing:

Terrie* (65.136.7.115) -- Monday, August 25 2003, 02:24 am

sigh.,......beautiful!

Kit, you are so talented..you have alot going for you..keep those poems coming in we all enjoy reading them...this one along w/many of your others, is very captivating..great job..you go girl...Terrie
Ben (67.124.46.110) -- Monday, August 25 2003, 07:14 am

Wandering through your.....

Wandering through your fantasy land with you was nice, KitKatrina! You really have a talent going for you. I am enjoying your work!! Thank You!! Keep writing!
lizy (144.139.39.89) -- Monday, November 10 2003, 10:46 am

wow

wow i thougt that was grate
 
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