Love?
11 August, 2003
Author: KitKatrina
A mist of rain and a gust of wind,
Caress my body and soothe my skin,
The grass below tickles my feet,
A feeling of awe and not of defeat,
A branch falls from the tree,
There it sits right next to me,
A snowflake drifts through the sky,
I sit there and just watch it fly,
Thunder rumbles through the night,
A feeling of excitement and not of fright,
What will happen? I don't want to know,
I love this feeling and don't want it to go,
Lightening tears through the night sky,
I sit there and count the seconds that go by,
It's a feeling of not knowing but it feels good,
This feeling wasn't made to be understood,
What is this feeling that scares me so,
I call it love, but love do I know?
Love is patient love is kind,
All these words fill my mind,
Love is a feeling of not knowing at all,
Will we be together or will it all fall?
I don't know, and I love that I don't,
I don't know if I will or if I won't,
What does the word LOVE mean anyway?
Is it just a word for people to say?
Love is a feeling and only meant for one other,
So wait for that person or don't even bother,
Love described in one word to me,
BEAUTIFUL and I hope that's what you see!
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Comments on this poem/writing:
| Ben (67.124.45.125) -- Saturday, August 16 2003, 04:31 am Your love poem made me smile, KitKatrina. It's a good thing to think about and I like some of the images you painted with your words! It's a little different, too! You are talented, keep writing!!! |
| Sarah Taurus (64.57.107.67) -- Wednesday, August 20 2003, 07:33 am Your poem brightens up my day. I love the way you right and you've inspired me to write... I think the words that you've chose for this poem are well thought out and outstanding. I love the way you let your poems flow and they always have a little kick to the end!!! keep up tha gr8 work girl!!! |
| Terrie* (65.148.214.19) -- Thursday, August 21 2003, 05:50 pm Kit, i just loved your outstanding piece of work...reality spoken in art form, a painting that is well illustrated you are a very unique person with inside depth in your work..you reach the inner soul of all your readers...you always get our attention...i'm LQQKING forward to reading more...always Terrie* |
| Martin Vann (63.208.46.19) -- Thursday, August 21 2003, 06:15 pm Ben, Enjoyed this as I did your others. I have seen the misty rain, mixed with a few lonely flakes, as if to challeng each other, to see who will win. Like two hearts, blowing in a Texas Norther, no knowing which way to go. Beautiful portrayal of the elements expressing our human emotions. Good Work, Mr. Ben! MartinV |
| Ben (64.175.68.35) -- Friday, August 22 2003, 06:02 pm Thank you Martin, but the credit for this peice of work all goes to KitKatrina! Ha! Ha! Haaaaa! I am with you though, it is very nice work from our very own poet, KitKatrina!! |
| Martin Vann (171.75.209.5) -- Friday, August 22 2003, 07:10 pm They say, as youget older, the eyse are the first to go. Please, accept my apology, for thinking that lame-brain Ben, could have wrtten such a beautiful poem! Kidding of course, about Ben, but my apology holds true, do love this by..., KITKATRINA! MartinV |
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