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Longing
16 July, 2003
Author: KitKatrina

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Lost for words
Only you bring
Not knowing what
Gone really means
Is this the feeling
Not having a dad, he's
Gone, and I'm longing

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Comments on this poem/writing:

Drea (68.116.64.38) -- Wednesday, July 23 2003, 11:43 pm

hmmm...

That was a very neat poem! I liked everything you said in it, and that is was LONGING is. Also I haven't seen a poem in here like this before, so good job being creative and fresh. So great job KitKatrina!
Pamela (194.125.159.148) -- Thursday, July 24 2003, 10:37 pm

Poems Like These

I have written poems like these too, it's kinda different and a unique way to write one, rather than the traditional stanzas and what not.
Nice one
Ben (67.123.244.245) -- Thursday, July 24 2003, 11:04 pm

Is this the feeling......

Cool, KitKatrina!! I like the style you used here to express in so few words a very big feeling. Keep up the good work! Thanks!
Terrie* (65.142.45.158) -- Friday, July 25 2003, 12:55 am

feel your words...

beautiful..i loved it!.....KitKatrina...excellent work......maybe i should share the poem i wrote to my husband in the same format.....when we got together ummmmmm... years ago...what do ya think?....thank you for sharing something, refreshing & unique..sweetie..
KitKatrina (68.116.64.38) -- Friday, July 25 2003, 06:16 pm

Yeah!

We used to do poems in school like this, way back in like second grade, so I just decided to do this the other week, and I loved it! So few words can express such a great feeling! Plus it's fun! :)
Sarah Taurus (64.57.108.188) -- Wednesday, August 20 2003, 05:56 pm

Im a big...

Im a big fan of your poems they express alot of emotion and alot of feelings, whenever I read your poems I get blown away...I feel for you !!!
 
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