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Torture
27 May, 2003
Author: Kiwi

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What person have i become
A mindless fool
With bleeding hands so numb
Offering a heart so cruel
“Please”, i beg, fall into my trap
So i may precede you to disaster
Read the f***in map
We might get there faster
just surrender to the knife
Oblivious to the piercing wounds
As i take your life
Accuse the faceless moons
Seek me out for company
To banish and quiet your fears
I smile, watching you perish in misery
And drown in your own tears
Scream out in anguish
As I torment you unrelentingly
Then ill leave you here to languish
And feed off your soul devouringly
Suffer and die in my glass prison
Binded with iron blood chains
The whip results with much frisson
As pain and pleasure run through your veins
You crave the sensation
You claw at the ice floor
Addicted to total domination
On your knees, begging for more
Body lashes out with desire
Lost in darkness with the blindfold
Hands tied with wire
My hands, your throat, i hold
Touch me
And watch your fingers burn
Till i hear your plea
Back to “reality” ill mercifully turn

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Comments on this poem/writing:

Adreanna (66.4.73.97) -- Tuesday, April 17 2007, 08:28 pm

no title

you really wrote this....Its AWESOME
Barb (67.58.206.163) -- Tuesday, April 17 2007, 11:20 pm

good writing

Your writing is so clear. You should use your talent for kind, nice subjects not violent, angry subjects. There is enough violent, nasty things going on in life today.
 
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