Her Suicide
14 January, 2004
Author: KristyD.
I'm sick of trying,
I'm sick of being alone.
No one really cares,
so I'll just stay here in my home.
I'm really tired of cryin,
and screaming out in pain.
I'm tired of everyone dyin,
and livin their life in vain.
Now I've finally felt it,
the pain that may set me free.
How can I live on without her,
knowing I can't be me.
I feel it is my fault,
if only I had been there.
Maybe I could've stopped her,
but now it's too late to care.
I can't believe she left me here,
to face the world alone.
Without her now I know,
my heart will turn to stone.
Life now has no meaning,
so why bother to live.
I don't see a point,
when there's nothing left to give
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Comments on this poem/writing:
| Lady Eryemil (64.12.96.40) -- Sunday, January 18 2004, 04:58 pm Suicide, people that commit suicide don't know how much pain they are gonna put the ones that love them through, yet we still can blame them, imagine how much pain someone must feel when they take their lives. |
| anonymous (66.24.166.159) -- Wednesday, January 28 2004, 11:57 pm can i use your poem |
| KristyD. (12.176.64.200) -- Friday, January 30 2004, 06:09 am Anonymous- I don't mind you using my poem as long as you don't take them as your own. :) |
| anonymous (205.188.208.71) -- Sunday, February 1 2004, 02:40 am It's hard living life when theres nothing to live for. You try to make it work but it doesn't...I don't want to be here anymore but I'm afraid to leave my family 'cause I don't want to put them in more pain but it's so hard to try to deal with this pain I don't want to die but sometimes I feel like it's the only way to get away from the pain...I dont know what to do, I need help but no one notices how alone i am |
| Megan (66.141.123.138) -- Monday, February 2 2004, 06:06 am I've read all of your work pretty much, its amazing and speaks to me. You have such a great talent, I hope I can write like you one day. |
| KristyD. (12.176.64.249) -- Monday, February 2 2004, 11:52 pm anonymous... everyone feels lonely at some point in their life some more than others, I especially feel lonelier now than ever b/c all but two of my friends have passed away but it's those two that I'm holding on for... in your case it would be your family... just hold on to them and think about how they would feel if anything happened to you and that will be what keeps you from making a mistake... Megan... I'm glad you like my poetry and I'm sure you can write better than me if you wanted to... thanks for readin |
| Melshina Silver (172.165.34.21) -- Wednesday, February 4 2004, 04:42 pm Very very good. |
| natasha lavoie (204.101.28.30) -- Wednesday, February 4 2004, 07:39 pm wow that was a really good poem ive thought bout suicide before iv even tryied a couple of times but i always get so scared i dont wanna hurt my family but they dont no the pain that they put me through every day i usally resort to making poems of my life an bout other stuff an i just wanted tho let u no that this is 1 of the most meaningfull poems ive ever read |
| katie Jackson (66.188.36.194) -- Sunday, February 8 2004, 12:13 am hey well i think that was a very good poem and i agree that by sum 1 committing suicide they may b putting an end to their pain but they cause more pain thro the ones they love!! |
| Suicide Interestee (24.192.244.110) -- Sunday, February 8 2004, 11:01 pm Hey, I am doing a speech on suicide for school and your poem gets across the point that I really want to show. Like how when you commit suicide you maybe exiting your own pain but you are hurting others. So basically I just wanted to say that your poem is amazing and thank-you very much! |
| Amy (203.221.139.175) -- Monday, February 9 2004, 12:34 pm id like to say that i love ur poems, i am also i poet and thats my passion. i just got outta the mental lock after i was found hanging from our back yard tree, i hate life! |
| anonymous (10.0.0.216, 205) -- Tuesday, February 10 2004, 05:14 pm Can i please use your poem for a class that i am taking? |
| Kerri (209.205.36.190) -- Thursday, February 12 2004, 04:35 pm My name is Kerri and in Language I have to find 3 poems on 1 topic. I chose Suicide and I really like yours. So could I please use it. |
| anonymous (172.16.6.93) -- Thursday, February 12 2004, 04:39 pm well if people took the time to actually care..im not talking about just sitting there and listen to what the other is going though then there would be less kids killing thereselves in the world! unless you are depressed or feel left out in the world then you just dont understand what that person is going through!kids are so mean to people now a days they dont care what they say about people...as long as everyone around them thinks it fun and are laughing at them...well i thats pretty much everything that i have to say!!!! |
| I live for my friends (24.112.89.8) -- Friday, February 13 2004, 10:44 pm If you feel like you want to let go you should listen to this song...Hold on by Good Cahrlotte...it's very inspirational. It'll help you get through the bad times. |
| demsdale (24.2.17.38) -- Thursday, February 19 2004, 03:30 am that was really good i almost started to cry i know ho u feel when somoe leaves u and u dont think its right but u just got to know there in a better place |
| KristyD. (12.176.64.48) -- Monday, February 23 2004, 10:43 pm Ok first I'd like to say thank you to all of you that read and or commented on my poems.... as for using them for school or any other reason I don't mind at all as long as you do not take them as your own... I would like for more people to read my poetry so it does not bother me for you to use them especially if it can help you or someone else just PLEASE do not use them for your own... thanks again.... |
| Stephannie Thompson (205.242.58.194) -- Wednesday, February 25 2004, 07:34 pm The poem was really good but I have tried to kill myself and after almost doing it I relized there are lots of things to live for |
| Michael Yarberry (66.32.97.68) -- Saturday, February 28 2004, 06:13 am You are a very creative person. I am so very sorry it had to take something like this to allow your talent to shine through |
| Johnna (67.3.145.232) -- Sunday, February 29 2004, 08:15 am I can really relate to your poem because my brother Darrin committed suicide a while back and i think about him most often. My brother was my life he kept me safe and held me close. He was the one and only "I thought so anyway" I was young when he took his life but i was old enough to know what he did and i just dont know why.People do have trials in life they go through that seem impossible to overcome but if and when they give up on themeselves they give up on their family and friends. Thank You that poem touched me. |
| LiZ (209.66.200.13) -- Tuesday, March 2 2004, 05:02 pm WoW this poem speaks to me no one i know has commited sucide but i have and it does make people sad and makes them blam themselves for something i did... its hard liveing when ur parents have to be in the same room as you sucide is not the answer i found that out the hard way... i LoVe uR PoEm |
| Sad/bad (82.24.149.65) -- Monday, January 6 2014, 03:18 am Sad is bad, But bad, is that I feel sad. |
| Lizzie (104.222.125.241) -- Saturday, March 28 2015, 04:37 pm I've thought about suicide before and I still do every now and again, my best friend knows I do and she talks me out of it all the time because she doesn't want to lose me, she tells me to think about who I'd be leaving behind, and I do because I don't want to leave my best friend alone, but I also don't want to keep walking through the halls at school hearing people saying things about me, I try to ignore it but it keeps getting worse at times, I act like I don't care but when I get home from school I go to my room and hide from my family. How do these feelings like nobody cares how do they go away? |
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