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Can't Say Good-bye
14 January, 2004
Author: KristyD.

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Blood trickles from my veins,
and spills onto the floor.
My death may cause you pain,
but I can't do this anymore.

I've tried to wait for death,
but it won't hurry up.
I draw in my final breath,
I'm ready to give up.

At first I could not feel the pain,
it now is kicking in.
I fought it for so long,
I finally gave in.

My breath is getting shorter,
and I'm getting really scared.
This isn't supposed to happen,
I'm supposed to be prepared.

I don't want to hurt,
I don't want to cry.
Yes I long for death,
but I can't say Good-bye.

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Comments on this poem/writing:

Lady Eryemil (64.12.96.107) -- Sunday, January 18 2004, 05:01 pm

^_^

*shudders* Not wanting to say good bye, it saved my life
heaven (68.43.99.209) -- Wednesday, February 18 2004, 01:04 am

i can relate

wow.after my second suicide attempt i felt this way.your such a great writer!!
Kayley (192.168.0.59) -- Monday, September 6 2004, 06:28 am

amazing

hey that was really amazing. please may i use your poem. i won't take it as my own.
 
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